[eng] First time around... (prologue)
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[eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Shinigami ned oľu 18, 2012 6:27 pm
I was riding in the back of a dusty old pickup, eastward, don't knowing where I'm going. But after a while the pickup stopped and I saw slim silhouette of a person going towards the end of a pickup. He opened squeaky old door of a pickup and sinked his head in searching for me.
"Here, let me help you with your luggage, I know it's heavy.." he said.
"It's ok, I can handle it." I responded quickly and jumped out of it.
"Thanks for the ride!"
"Sure, anytime.."
He went on his way, while I was looking around the strange place. The place was colorful, magical, full of toys. It was the circus. Large groups of people puttered around, just like they're searching for something.
![[eng] First time around... (prologue) Tumblrlxxte7rctu1qafuwh](https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img811/9800/tumblrlxxte7rctu1qafuwh.jpg)
P.S.
"Here, let me help you with your luggage, I know it's heavy.." he said.
"It's ok, I can handle it." I responded quickly and jumped out of it.
"Thanks for the ride!"
"Sure, anytime.."
He went on his way, while I was looking around the strange place. The place was colorful, magical, full of toys. It was the circus. Large groups of people puttered around, just like they're searching for something.
P.S.
- Spoiler:
- Tekst je bio pisan za jednu stranicu na engleskom prije dosta vremena, pisala sam ga iz glave na engleskom odmah (ne prvo na hrvatski pa prevela), tako da ga neću prevoditi zbog toga što možda ne bi zvučao tako kako zvuči na engleskom.
Nadam se da znate engleski toliko da skužite tekst, no naravno ako netko ima koje pitanje ili nešto ne kuži slobodno pitajte.
Uživajte, nadam se da hoćete.
Zadnja promjena: Shinigami; sri tra 18, 2012 12:18 pm; ukupno mijenjano 3 put/a.
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Classy ned oľu 18, 2012 8:33 pm
Rijetko tko može pisati dobro, a da nije njihov materinji jezik ali tebi je to uspjelo :)
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Phalange. pon oľu 19, 2012 4:54 pm
Pretty Reckless je napisao/la:Rijetko tko može pisati dobro, a da nije njihov materinji jezik ali tebi je to uspjelo :)
Točno to. Super pišeš :)
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Shinigami pon oľu 19, 2012 5:24 pm
Ajme, thanks ljudi, nisam se nadala tako lijepim komentarima
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by VanillaKismet pon oľu 19, 2012 5:37 pm
Jako ljepo i dobro napisano!
Svaka čast :D
Svaka čast :D
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Princess. pon oľu 19, 2012 7:10 pm
Slažem se sa curama. Love it. :D
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Shinigami pon oľu 19, 2012 9:45 pm
Jooj, jooj, jooj, hvalaaaaaaaaa :)
*shy*
*shy*
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Loud. uto oľu 20, 2012 9:16 am
Meni se dopada. :D Lepo. :D
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Shinigami čet oľu 22, 2012 7:07 pm
Ajme, hvala ljudi, nadam se da ce vam se dopadat nastavci :D
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by VanillaKismet čet oľu 22, 2012 7:16 pm
Biće ih?
AAAAA *.*
I ADORE YOU *-*
AAAAA *.*
I ADORE YOU *-*
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by Shinigami čet oľu 22, 2012 7:46 pm
Oujeeea, hehehe, ofskroz..ella_b je napisao/la:Biće ih?
AAAAA *.*
I ADORE YOU *-*
Koliko ih brzo želiš?
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Re: [eng] First time around... (prologue)
by VanillaKismet čet oľu 22, 2012 7:56 pm
haha što prije to bolje :3
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